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Tuesday, June 2, 2020

Pobble 365 The Night Thieves

One night, in a rusty toy van that was stolen by the night thieves when they first started their horrible career they were moving through the city looking for sparkly, expensive, valuable treasure to steal and add to their collection. They went past buildings and stores window shopping on  all kinds of shiny jewelry, and valuable things, diamond rings, pearl necklaces, crystal earrings,golden tiaras, but none of those things seems to catch their eyes, not tonight. They were after something much more special, something much more important and valuable, something they never even thought stealing of before. Of course they can  always just change their minds and go on to steal all the other less odd “valuables” they mostly go for, but no. When they were half way through the dark city, quiet and unnoticed, the only light source is the street lights because the moon was covered by dark clouds which gave them more advantage on sneaking around. without noticing someone has gotten its eyes on them,someone who wanted to end these thieves horrible career that is causing lots of problems all over the streets once and for all.

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