For reading we had the make a slide show or a drawing about what we did in the holidays here is mine.
Wednesday, October 20, 2021
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Kia Ora Avryl,
ReplyDeleteI like how much detail you put into each event in the holidays. I also like how you have added images of the places you went.
In the holidays, I went to Sumner Beach as well to walk my dog. He really enjoyed running round and socialising with the other dogs.
Next time, you should add in more full stops as the sentences are extremely long.
What was the ultimate highlight of the holidays?
Zara
Hello Avryl,
ReplyDeleteWoW your holiday sounds so fun. That's really creative of you to add pictures of the places you went. In the holidays, I went to my cousins house to celebrate her birthday, and the cake looked too sweet. It was covered with tons of icing. It was some Disney princess and she is like 5 or 6 I forgot. Anyways Like what Zara said, next time you should add in more full stops cause some of your sentence are long.
Anyways keep up the good work!
-Laisa<3
Hi Avryl,
ReplyDeleteIts sounds like you had a lot of fun. I like your blog post. I like the amount of slides and information you have put into your slide. I like how you added photos. In the holidays I didn't do much but I did go to a trampoline park and the mall. Maybe next time you could add to your blurb what your favorite highlight was and a question. Have a good day.
-Trinity
Hi Avryl,
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you enjoyed your holidays! For my holidays I just stayed home which was sad.
Did you take any photos of what you did in the holidays? If you did maybe next time you could add some photos of you and maybe your family in like the mall etc.
What was your favourite part about your holidays?
I hope you have a good day! Bye!
-Tiare.
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ReplyDeleteAshlyNovember 4, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Hello Avryl,
I like how you included that Amber had a tantrum,
very detailed...
I guess you could go to university and college however old you are,
but I don't think a 90 years old person would go to university because wouldn't you have retirement funds and stuff?
Like what everybody else has said,
you can work to improve you grammar.
-Ashly
I guess I can improve my grammar next time I write a blog post, and old people do get retirement funds but it is not a lot and you need to build up your family fortune and the retirement money won't be enough to beat the rothchilds.
DeleteHi Avryl,
DeleteI am pretty sure that most old people's retirement funds are a lot because the very purpose of retirement funds is to give old people who can no longer work enough money until they die.
Hello Ashly
DeleteAs you said retirement money give the old person "enough" money to live until they die, so it is probably just enough for them, therefore after they die the money they hand down won't be a lot so they can't really build a family fortune.
Hello Avryl,
DeleteIt does not matter how much money they have or don't have,
that was simply not my point,
we are getting rather far off subject from your blog post so,
I really like how you have the two dogs bowing at the end,
it's really cute.